Differential D28798

Make warning and error messages grammatically correct
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Authored by ngraham on Apr 13 2020, 4:21 PM.

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R845:d17f0e717fcf: Make warning and error messages grammatically correct
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These messages are currently comma splices, which are incorrect.

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R845 Plasma Vault
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ngraham created this revision.Apr 13 2020, 4:21 PM
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ivan added a comment.Apr 13 2020, 4:48 PM

Maybe "Unable to close the vault; it is being used by %1" -> "Unable to close the vault as it is being used by %1" ?

"Unable to close the vault; an application is using it" -> "Unable to close the vault because an application is using it"

While writing for Manning, I was told to avoid semicolons and try to rephrase the sentence instead.

ngraham updated this revision to Diff 80031.Apr 13 2020, 4:55 PM

"because" is better

ivan accepted this revision.Apr 13 2020, 6:27 PM
This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Apr 13 2020, 6:27 PM
Closed by commit R845:d17f0e717fcf: Make warning and error messages grammatically correct (authored by ngraham). · Explain WhyApr 13 2020, 6:34 PM
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