Some stuff you may consider that may improve the site:
https://trubits.io/
Introducing truOS Desktop
- Minor edits and corrections
" Designed for personal and professional use, truOS provides a fast and reliable computing experience with a familiar yet refreshing user interface. With a vast library of applications via the truOS Store, and robust security features, truOS is built to handle all your desktop computing requirements. Enjoy a seamless and enjoyable computing experience with regular updates and exceptional customer support. "
- Opportunity to mention (and link to) KDE Plasma here, maybe something like
"Designed for personal and professional use, truOS _is built on KDE Plasma, an operating system 27 years in the making,_ and provides a fast and reliable computing experience [...]"
Touch Mobile -
Renamed to truOS Mobile to allow the touch brand to be used for kiosk device applications
- Mention (and link to) Plasma Mobile here somewhere?: "Based on KDE's Plasma Mobile environment and app ecosystems... "
https://trubits.io/pricing/
Title
- Change to "Fair prices to fit your needs" (add _s_ and remove full stop). Rest of text is fine.
truOS Desktop
Some minor corrections:
- "Bring new life to your laptops and desktops with truOS."
- "Stable and secure OS desktops and laptops"
- "truOS Desktop activation is valid for one PC at a time. You may migrate an activation to a different PC later."
- Needs to specify what activation entails: Can users get truOS for free but need activation to get support, automatic updates, access to documentation and training videos?
- "Secured from a wide range of viruses and malware"
truOS touch mobile
Minor edits and corrections:
- "Let's bring back privacy and security to our phones together! Partner with us."
- "Deploy hardened and locked phones across your organization."
- "Secured from a wide range of viruses, malware and hackers."
truOS Nano
- Specify what "activation" entails.
truOS Cloud
- Specify what "activation" entails.