Added content for responsive and embeded toolbar
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Authored by fabianr on Oct 15 2018, 6:36 PM.

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Added content for tool bar embeded in other components and on responsive behavior of the toolbar.

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fabianr requested review of this revision.Oct 15 2018, 6:36 PM
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fabianr retitled this revision from Start to write content bout responsive toolbar to Start to write content about responsive toolbar.Oct 24 2018, 7:47 AM
fabianr retitled this revision from Start to write content about responsive toolbar to Added content for responsive and embeded toolbar .
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mart added a subscriber: mart.Oct 31 2018, 3:36 PM

looks good to me

ngraham requested changes to this revision.Oct 31 2018, 3:40 PM
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Just a few comments.

Side note: I don't like how we're inconsistent with "tool bar" and "toolbar". I would suggest standardizing on "toolbar".

source/components/navigation/toolbar.rst
28

Captions don't need periods at the end

75

Remove "from user"

(or replace with "from the user")

87–88

Rewrite this as:

Do not change the button style from the default, which is is "text beside icons"

This revision now requires changes to proceed.Oct 31 2018, 3:40 PM
fabianr updated this revision to Diff 44689.Nov 2 2018, 8:31 AM
fabianr retitled this revision from Added content for responsive and embeded toolbar to Added content for responsive and embeded toolbar.
  • Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/master' into toolbar
  • Renamed tool bar as toolbar. Removed duplicate image in toolbar page.
fabianr updated this revision to Diff 44690.Nov 2 2018, 8:36 AM
  • Fixed wording and spelling.
fabianr marked 3 inline comments as done.Nov 2 2018, 8:36 AM
fabianr updated this revision to Diff 44691.Nov 2 2018, 8:37 AM
  • Removed no longer used image

Thanks, this is looking great! Just a few more comments below...

source/components/navigation/toolbar.rst
24–29

an other -> another

inline mesage it is used -> inline mesage, it is used

34–36

"apply" -> "show" or maybe "display"

46

Hmm, quite a lot of our apps have toolbar buttons that show drop-down menus. Are we sure this is a problem?

63

only, if -> only if

75

This one isn't addressed yet. I still see "from user" at the end of the sentence.

88–90

which is is -> which is

fabianr updated this revision to Diff 45067.Nov 7 2018, 7:06 PM
fabianr marked 6 inline comments as done.
  • Fixed wording and spelling.

Thanks for the feedback!

ngraham accepted this revision.Nov 7 2018, 7:28 PM

Thanks for the impeovement! :)

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Nov 7 2018, 7:28 PM
fabianr closed this revision.Nov 7 2018, 7:36 PM