Updated some descriptions, web links, names, author and thanks lists
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asensi requested review of this revision.May 1 2018, 7:19 PM
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asensi updated this revision to Diff 33461.May 1 2018, 9:24 PM

A reference to KDE Plasma 4 was changed.

nmel requested changes to this revision.May 2 2018, 4:36 AM
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Thanks for the updates, Toni!

because of pending changes and related ones

Could you please rephrase? It's unclear what you mean.

get-involved/contributors/index.html
81–85

laying the foundations

laying down the foundations

84

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Norton_Commander/

Bad URL: Wikipedia does not have an article with this exact name
Should be: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Norton_Commander (without slash)

https://www.ibiblio.org/mc/

It's redirecting to http://midnight-commander.org/ for me. Should we specify the direct link?

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borrowed
it's a idiom

index.html
55

Same here.

This revision now requires changes to proceed.May 2 2018, 4:36 AM
asensi updated this revision to Diff 33483.May 2 2018, 11:37 AM
asensi retitled this revision from Update several web pages because of pending changes and related ones to Update several web pages because of 1) some changes that were pending 2) some other related changes.

Some changes (proposed by Nikita Melnichenko) were made:

Could you please rephrase?

I've rephrased it, now it's longer but that doesn't matter a lot :-)

laying down the foundations

I would leave it as it was, as it also looks like "lay foundations" is more used:

https://www.google.com/search?q="lay"*foundations+site%3Anytimes.com

borrowed
it's a idiom

:-) It's an idiom that people see in movies, being used by people who steal but doesn't want to use that word :-), fortunately Krusader stole nothing.

The links about Norton Commander and Midnight Commander were changed.

martinkostolny added a subscriber: martinkostolny.

Thanks Toni for updating the website! I agree with the current state of this diff.

nmel accepted this revision.May 3 2018, 7:40 AM

Some changes (proposed by Nikita Melnichenko) were made:

Could you please rephrase?

I've rephrased it, now it's longer but that doesn't matter a lot :-)

Indeed. Maybe something like "Updated descriptions, author and thanks lists". This is what you did, isn't it?

laying down the foundations

I would leave it as it was, as it also looks like "lay foundations" is more used:

https://www.google.com/search?q="lay"*foundations+site%3Anytimes.com

No problem.

borrowed
it's a idiom

:-) It's an idiom that people see in movies, being used by people who steal but doesn't want to use that word :-), fortunately Krusader stole nothing.

I looked in a dictionary, it doesn't seem to have this negative accent you're talking about. I'm not an expert in English though. Just felt a bit unnatural about copy. I don't mind leaving as is.

The links about Norton Commander and Midnight Commander were changed.

Thanks!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.May 3 2018, 7:40 AM
asensi marked 2 inline comments as done.May 3 2018, 8:51 AM

Indeed. Maybe something like "Updated descriptions, author and thanks lists". This is what you did, isn't it?

Thanks, Nikita! That's probably better. Because some names were also changed years ago (e.g. "KDE" became "KDE Plasma"), and some web links were also updated, just in case I will change the description to "Updated some descriptions, web links, names, author and thanks lists".

asensi retitled this revision from Update several web pages because of 1) some changes that were pending 2) some other related changes to Updated some descriptions, web links, names, author and thanks lists.May 3 2018, 8:51 AM